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Thursday

Thursday's activity is editing.

Go back to Tuesday's piece of writing, re read it.

Can you edit it?

Use a dictionary  ( an online one is fine) https://www.dictionary.com/ to correct any spelling errors.

Use a Thesaurus https://www.thesaurus.com/ to try to improve your vocabulary and find better words to make your writing interesting.

Re read it again, is is better? Is there anything else that needs changing?

Think about: Paragraphs,

                     Capital letters,

                      Full stops,

                     Inverted commas,

                      Fronted adverbials.

Friendship
  • "A sweet friendship refreshes the soul." Proverbs 27:9
Forgiveness
  • "forgive as the Lord forgave you." Colossians 3:13

Trust
  • "When I am afraid, I put my trust in you." Psalm 56:3

Peace
  • "The Lord blesses his people with peace." Psalm 29:11

Wisdom
  • Blessed are those who find wisdom, who gain understanding. Proverbs 3:13

Responsibility
  • So each of us will give an account of himself to God.Romans 14:12

Respect
  • Be Devoted to one another,honour one another above yourselves.Romans12:10

Reverence
  • Be Devoted to one another,honour one another above yourselves.Romans 12:1

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