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Wednesday Independent Write

Wednesday 6th May 2020
Can I write a diary entry?


For today’s independent write I would like you to write a diary entry pretending you are James from James and the Giant Peach. You can choose any part of the book that we have read so far and write about that specific event. I have written mine based on when James met the insects as this was my favourite part! Below, is a video lesson which goes through our success criteria and gives you some ideas!
Your challenge today is to make sure you write in chronological order (time order) which is mentioned in the video but is on your success criteria for today!

Have fun writing- remember to email me the final result.smiley

Independent Writing Lesson

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  • "A sweet friendship refreshes the soul." Proverbs 27:9
  • "forgive as the Lord forgave you." Colossians 3:13

  • "When I am afraid, I put my trust in you." Psalm 56:3

  • "The Lord blesses his people with peace." Psalm 29:11

  • Blessed are those who find wisdom, who gain understanding. Proverbs 3:13

  • So each of us will give an account of himself to God.Romans 14:12

  • Be Devoted to one another,honour one another above yourselves.Romans12:10

  • Be Devoted to one another,honour one another above yourselves.Romans 12:1